• 14 votes
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I need you
like the stars need the moon
as a nutruring mother
a guide for their light

I need you
like we need the sun
to live together
to live

I need you
like the stream needs an ocean
it has it's path chosen
and I hope you do too

I hope you'll get over it
and I hope you love me
As much as I love you

Comments


Very sweet(: I love it(:


3  
 Beccaboo


Awwww that's really sweet!! :) x


1  
 Lilyrose124


I think it's lovely. :)


2  
 cindy112


This is not the right app for a post like this. And before people start telling me "this a relationship/romance application, this post fits into that category" I'll remind u that without order, there is chaos. Sooner than later we'll have users selling sex toys on here, or using it as a dating/meeting network, after all posts like that would have as much validity as a post like this. I'm not tryna be cruel or anything, it is a good poem and all. But sorry, this isn't the right place.


2  
 Marteta


I just had to get my feelings out sorry didn't know where to post it :( sorry if this bugs anyone


0  
 Eurogurl


Post it on quizilla.com you can post quizes, songs,and poems :) hoped I helped? (:


1  
 Snapcracklepop


It's sweet :)


2  
 Shel


That's so cute


3  
 Leebeebabe


Awww

that's good


1  
 javalava


Not too great. It couldve been more creative with the vocabulary.

And before you vote me down, remember that this is my opinion and I'm entitled to it. Just because you don't agree doesn't mean you should vote me down.


2  
 Remmie


I think it is rlly rlly sweet:D


1  
 Lonelygirl13


:)))


1  
 beachgirl2014


It doesn't even make sense. I don't like it.

I think you have potential though.


1  
 Alliecat


This comment was voted down by the community.

-5  
 WHITEPOWER


Woah someones acting racist.


0  
 Eurogurl


Someone IS racist. They shouldn't be here.


1  
 Remmie


This comment was voted down by the community.

-2  
 WHITEPOWER


Message to the KKK: go. Home. Bitch.


1  
 Eurogurl


Not the right place 4 a poem. This a serious app for advice. Not the place for writing cute poems.


1  
 Ladybug89


Agree


0  
 Snapcracklepop


^^^relaxx.

I thought it was very cute:)


0  
 Poxy15


Awwwww I love it (:


0  
 Heartbreakerx

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